“Show me the suggested 1 article for this post.” copy/interaction could be improved

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Oli Studholme

03 May, 2012 05:52 AM

I have some suggestions for improving this interaction:

  • Tender generally uses second person pronouns (“Your Open Discussions (2)”, “You can search our knowledge base articles…” etc), so using first person objective (“Show me”) seems out of place
  • There’s no mention of what kind of article will be shown (knowledge base), or why (“Show me a potential solution…”)
  • Rather than offering to show it would be better to just do it and actually show the first 1-3 matched articles
  • The lack of category information means some knowledge base articles may appear to answer the question but be inappropriate

I suggest changing to the following copy:

These [knowledge base] articles may help to answer your question:

  1. {Article title} ({Article category metadata})

    {First line of article}

[Show other potential answers] from the knowledge base and other discussions…

Here’s an example discussion where the current copy was confusing for the commenter.

Thanks for your consideration.

  1. 2 Posted by Amanda on 03 May, 2012 06:18 PM

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    Oli,

    Thank you for your thoughtful and detailed feedback. I will pass this along to the owner to see if he agrees with your suggestions in changing the language.

    Thanks!

  2. Nicole closed this discussion on 29 Jun, 2012 06:25 PM.

  3. Amanda closed this discussion on 29 Jun, 2012 09:37 PM.

  4. Oli Studholme re-opened this discussion on 04 Oct, 2012 12:52 PM

  5. 3 Posted by Oli Studholme on 04 Oct, 2012 12:52 PM

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    I’m still frequently getting support questions that are answered in the knowledge base, but which the poster never sees because it’s hidden behind “Show me the suggested X articles for this post.” links. Please, rather than offering to show it would be better to just do it and actually show the first 1-3 matched articles, for those who don’t read the confirmation screen.

    Thanks.

  6. 4 Posted by Amanda on 05 Oct, 2012 08:48 PM

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    Oli,

    I'll make a ticket for your suggestion so it can be considered by the team.

    Thanks for your feedback!

  7. Nicole closed this discussion on 08 Dec, 2012 04:37 PM.

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